DJ has completed his first draft of editing to create versions of the short videos with a consistent look and feel (subtitling, music, etc).
The link to the 5 files is here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1HcjGUt0bGk-ZApdIDmkctuwrGYw-3Z-h
Each team should review their video and Reply to this message with their feedback: errors spotted, formatting issues, etc
Brant
Thank you DJ! its a finest version ever.
just need to clarify that the character name is remain "Asif" only.
Best,
Samreen
Hi DJ,
I believe that Samreen means that there is no need to supply any additional information crediting Asif's last name, location, etc, but just to use only the name "Asif" in scenes with him.
Brant
Thanks Samreen, would you put his job title as - clothes seller or entrepreneur?
Thanks DJ, Asif is a student while part time clothes seller.
So title would be Part time cloths seller or student & part time clothes seller
whatever you feel suits.
I have removed the name and title as he introduces himself at the start.
Ok. Noted. Thank you.
Dear DJ!
our video main Tital will be " youth leads the change " Pakistan. can you please chnage it in the leatest version, also can you please send us google map hyderabad insert as you used in short version,we want to use it in 5 mint video, but we could not make refine as you did.
Thanks
Samreen
Hi DJ, thank you very much for the edit. Our video has improved so much. Can you please kindly add the first of name of the 2nd interviewee in the video, please? Her full name is "Uyanga Tsoggerel".
Many thanks,
Erka
Hi DJ,
Apologies for last minute update request. Can we change a line in the subtitle as I feel I don't have strong evidence to support the statement. It is starting at 00:56 second saying: "The government had transferred ownership of the land to a private company" into "The government has contracted a private company to build a commercial centre.".
Thanks,
Udval
Hi DJ and Brant,
I hope you are fine.
Many many thanks to DJ for enhancing our work. Now, our video looks awesome. I have few feedback for DJ.
00:02 Text box should be shorten and line should be little long.
00:07 Can’t find Nepal, an outline map should be included.
00:41 Text masking Problem
00:46 Text masking Problem
1:03 Text masking Problem
1:09 Text masking Problem, below text can we write Local Farmer or should we keep his name?
Regards,
Soney
Hi DJ and Brant,
Thank you so much for making our video much more beautiful.
I would like to add that in our video subtitle text is coming earlier than It was supposed to come.
0:42 subtile need to start at 0:46
0:52 need to start at 0:54
1:00 need to start at 1:02
may be we can skip the subtitle text "However, the challenges remains to convince farmer to use biochar". Because last part what farmer saying is also the same:
Name / title of farmer:
Mr. Sumsher K.C.
Local Farmer
Thank you dj clark already editing his video us. Very nice one and no mistake.
Many thanks
Regards
Annet
Dear Brant and DJ,
Thank you so much for the efforts you have taken. We are happy that at certain points you have enhanced the text.
We have found that the audio goes incongruous with the video at the following timings:
0.08-0.14: the audio that comes at 0.08 must come at 0.14
0.18-0.22: ambience of the previous visual is heard and it has to be removed
0.26-0.43: remove the jarring sound
0.37-0.47: the original ambience is missing
1.07-1.23: remove the jarring sound
corrections in the text
0.23 include the following sentence:
Students and faculty act on it by transforming these issues into LiFE projects.
0.28 wrong text appears (repetition of the previous text). It has to be removed.
1.28: the third screenshot of the app is missing. It has to be included.
Regards,
Manju
Hi Manju,
Here are my notes on your change requests,
0.08-0.14: the audio that comes at 0.08 must come at 0.14 - I will be able to fix the audio issues when I get access to your original files as I only have the audio from your nail version. Please make sure you bring all the original files you shot on a disk to Singapore.
0.18-0.22: ambience of the previous visual is heard and it has to be removed - see the above
0.26-0.43: remove the jarring sound - see above
0.37-0.47: the original ambience is missing - not sure what you mean here as I only have the sound you provided with the clip but we can sort this out in Singapore
1.07-1.23: remove the jarring sound - see above
corrections in the text
0.23 include the following sentence: - Have put this in at 28
Students and faculty act on it by transforming these issues into LiFE projects.
0.28 wrong text appears (repetition of the previous text). It has to be removed. - Have done
1.28: the third screenshot of the app is missing. It has to be included. - I am using your latest video "final 28th December" so if you need anything extra you need to supply an updated video
Hi DJ,
Is it still possible to change the writing in a short video?
I mistakenly wrote on another page, Error in text at the end of the video
Every year Semarang produces half a million tons of waste. (00:00:13,500 – 00:00:17,000)
If the garbage is not managed well, it can be harmful. (00:00:18,000 – 00:00:21,000)
The garbage is harvested for Methane Gas,
which can be used for local residents to cook. (00:00:22,000 – 00:00:27,000)
One resident has opened a food stall using the gas. (00:00:29,500 – 00:00:34,500)
The owner uses a barter system to take payment from the scavengers. (00:00:40,500 – 00:00:45,500)
This allows them to get the food they need. (00:00:46,500 – 00:00:50,500)
“Innovative waste management make a better life” – Mr. Sarimin (00:00:53,500 – 00:00:56,250)
“In the future, the methane gas will be developed into electricity” – Mr. Wahyu, Head of Division Jatibarang Landfill (00:00:56,750 – 00:00:59,000)
Thanks DJ