Tracking progress on video development and production - SHORT VIDEO for social media

DJ's editing of presentation versions

 
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DJ's editing of presentation versions
by Brant Knützen - Saturday, 29 December 2018, 3:49 PM
 

DJ has completed his first draft of editing to create versions of the short videos with a consistent look and feel (subtitling, music, etc).

The link to the 5 files is here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1HcjGUt0bGk-ZApdIDmkctuwrGYw-3Z-h

Each team should review their video and Reply to this message with their feedback: errors spotted, formatting issues, etc

Brant

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SPO - Pakistan
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Thursday, 3 January 2019, 8:28 PM
 

Thank you DJ! its a finest version ever. 

just need to clarify that the character name is remain "Asif"  only. 

Best,

Samreen 

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Re: SPO - Pakistan
by Brant Knützen - Thursday, 3 January 2019, 9:01 PM
 

Hi DJ,

I believe that Samreen means that there is no need to supply any additional information crediting Asif's last name, location, etc, but just to use only the name "Asif" in scenes with him.

Brant

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Re: SPO - Pakistan
by DJ Clark - Monday, 14 January 2019, 3:41 PM
 

Thanks Samreen, would you put his job title as - clothes seller or entrepreneur?

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Re: SPO - Pakistan
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Monday, 14 January 2019, 5:11 PM
 

Thanks DJ, Asif is a student while part time clothes seller.

 So title would be  Part time cloths seller  or student & part time clothes seller

 whatever you feel suits.


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Re: SPO - Pakistan
by DJ Clark - Monday, 14 January 2019, 5:26 PM
 

I have removed the name and title as he introduces himself at the start.

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Re: SPO - Pakistan
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Monday, 14 January 2019, 5:53 PM
 


Ok. Noted. Thank you. 

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Re: SPO - Pakistan
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Thursday, 17 January 2019, 4:50 PM
 

Dear DJ!

our video main Tital will be " youth leads the change " Pakistan. can you please chnage it in the leatest version, also  can you please send us google map hyderabad insert as you used in short version,we want to use it in 5 mint video, but we could not make refine as you did.


Thanks 

Samreen



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Re: SPO - Pakistan
by DJ Clark - Friday, 18 January 2019, 2:26 PM
 

updated

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Re: SPO - Pakistan
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Friday, 18 January 2019, 5:47 PM
 

Thank you! 

Samreen 

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Team Mongolia
by Erdenechimeg Altankhuyag - Friday, 4 January 2019, 2:36 PM
 

Hi DJ, thank you very much for the edit. Our video has improved so much. Can you please kindly add the first of name of the 2nd interviewee in the video, please? Her full name is "Uyanga Tsoggerel".

Many thanks,

Erka

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Re: Team Mongolia
by Udval Oyunsaikhan - Saturday, 12 January 2019, 4:20 PM
 

Hi DJ,

Apologies for last minute update request. Can we change a line in the subtitle as I feel I don't have strong evidence to support the statement. It is starting at 00:56 second saying: "The government had transferred ownership of the land to a private company" into "The government has contracted a private company to build a commercial centre.".

Thanks,

Udval

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Re: Team Mongolia
by DJ Clark - Monday, 14 January 2019, 5:28 PM
 

Have done this

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Re: Team Mongolia
by DJ Clark - Monday, 14 January 2019, 5:29 PM
 

This is done

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YFEED - Nepal
by Soney Rai - Saturday, 5 January 2019, 2:37 AM
 

Hi DJ and Brant,

I hope you are fine.

Many many thanks to DJ for enhancing our work. Now, our video looks awesome. I have few feedback for DJ.

00:02 Text box should be shorten and line should be little long.

00:07 Can’t find Nepal, an outline map should be included.

00:41 Text masking Problem

00:46 Text masking Problem

1:03 Text masking Problem

1:09 Text masking Problem, below text can we write Local Farmer or should we keep his name?

Regards,

Soney

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YFEED - Nepal
by Krishna Bahadur Khadka - Sunday, 6 January 2019, 1:39 PM
 

Hi DJ and Brant,

Thank you so much for making our video much more beautiful. 

I would like to add that in our video subtitle text is coming earlier than It was supposed to come.

0:42 subtile need to start at 0:46

0:52 need to start at 0:54

1:00 need to start at 1:02

may be we can skip the subtitle text "However, the challenges remains to convince farmer to use biochar". Because last part what farmer saying is also the same:

Name / title of farmer:

Mr. Sumsher K.C.
Local Farmer

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Re: YFEED - Nepal
by DJ Clark - Monday, 14 January 2019, 5:24 PM
 

Hi Soney,

Some notes back. 

0.02: Am sorry I can't change the length of the line for this plugin.

0.07 - yes can do that for you

00.41 - fixed the text

0.46 - fixed the text

1.03 - fixed the text

1.09 - Local farmer is OK but we should also put his name. Do you have it?


DJ

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Re: YFEED - Nepal
by Krishna Bahadur Khadka - Wednesday, 16 January 2019, 8:00 AM
 

Hi Dj,

The name of the the farmer is 

Mr. Sumsher K.C.
Local Farmer


Regards,
Krishna

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Re: YFEED - Nepal
by DJ Clark - Friday, 18 January 2019, 2:26 PM
 

updated

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Re: YFEED - Nepal
by DJ Clark - Tuesday, 15 January 2019, 11:55 AM
 

OK these are all done now other than the first one which I can't control with this particular pluggin.

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SCU - Indonesia
by maria igrecia - Saturday, 5 January 2019, 12:28 PM
 

Thank you dj clark already editing his video us. Very nice one and no mistake.

Many thanks 

Regards

Annet

MANJU MURALEEDHARAN
LDC - India
by Manju Muraleedharan - Sunday, 6 January 2019, 12:29 AM
 

Dear Brant and DJ,

Thank you so much for the efforts you have taken. We are happy that at certain points you have enhanced the text. 

We have found that the audio goes incongruous with the video at the following timings:

0.08-0.14: the audio that comes at 0.08 must come at 0.14

0.18-0.22: ambience of the previous visual is heard and it has to be removed

0.26-0.43: remove the jarring sound

0.37-0.47: the original ambience is missing

1.07-1.23: remove the jarring sound

corrections in the text

0.23 include the following sentence:

Students and faculty act on it by transforming these issues into LiFE projects.

0.28 wrong text appears (repetition of the previous text). It has to be removed.

1.28: the third screenshot of the app is missing. It has to be included.

Regards,

Manju


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Re: LDC - India
by DJ Clark - Tuesday, 15 January 2019, 12:08 PM
 

Hi Manju,

Here are my notes on your change requests,

0.08-0.14: the audio that comes at 0.08 must come at 0.14 - I will be able to fix the audio issues when I get access to your original files as I only have the audio from your nail version. Please make sure you bring all the original files you shot on a disk to Singapore.

0.18-0.22: ambience of the previous visual is heard and it has to be removed - see the above

0.26-0.43: remove the jarring sound - see above

0.37-0.47: the original ambience is missing - not sure what you mean here as I only have the sound you provided with the clip but we can sort this out in Singapore

1.07-1.23: remove the jarring sound - see above

corrections in the text

0.23 include the following sentence: - Have put this in at 28 

Students and faculty act on it by transforming these issues into LiFE projects.

0.28 wrong text appears (repetition of the previous text). It has to be removed. - Have done

1.28: the third screenshot of the app is missing. It has to be included. - I am using your latest video "final 28th December" so if you need anything extra you need to supply an updated video



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SCU - Indonesia
by Kresno Widyatmoko - Saturday, 19 January 2019, 12:54 PM
 

Hi DJ,

Is it still possible to change the writing in a short video?

I mistakenly wrote on another page, Error in text at the end of the video

Every year Semarang produces half a million tons of waste. (00:00:13,500 – 00:00:17,000)

 If the garbage is not managed well, it can be harmful. (00:00:18,000 – 00:00:21,000)

 The garbage is harvested for Methane Gas,

 which can be used for local residents to cook. (00:00:22,000 – 00:00:27,000)

 One resident has opened a food stall using the gas. (00:00:29,500 – 00:00:34,500)

 The owner uses a barter system to take payment from the scavengers. (00:00:40,500 – 00:00:45,500)

 This allows them to get the food they need. (00:00:46,500 – 00:00:50,500)

 “Innovative waste management make a better life” – Mr. Sarimin (00:00:53,500 – 00:00:56,250)

“In the future, the methane gas will be developed into electricity” – Mr. Wahyu, Head of Division Jatibarang Landfill (00:00:56,750 – 00:00:59,000)


Thanks DJ