Tracking progress on video development and production - LONG VIDEO for conference display

Shelter Participatory Organization

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suggestions for long video
by Brant Knützen - Thursday, 22 November 2018, 2:21 PM

Dear Samreen,

Find attached my revised version of your 5-minute script.

I have simplified the sentence structures and tried to retain the emotional impacts you specified.

I also included a picture I found on the web which symbolizes the sort of community cooperation you described.

Hopefully it will help guide your team production of the longer video for conference viewing.