Tracking progress on video development and production - SHORT VIDEO for social media

Shelter Participatory Organization

 
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Shelter Participatory Organization
by Brant Knützen - Tuesday, 23 October 2018, 10:44 AM
 

This area is for posting draft videos by Shelter Participatory Organization.

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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Sunday, 28 October 2018, 10:13 PM
 

This is the latest version of our 90 sec short video. 



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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Brant Knützen - Thursday, 8 November 2018, 2:45 PM
 

Hi Samreen / Waqas,

Please upload the "clean" version of your short video WITH the ambient sound to this directory:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1lQzIn2JEM8NFuELr0aSXSoPRbBvi_CRE?usp=sharing

Also, please post here to let everyone know that you have uploaded it for review and download by DJ.

Brant


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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Monday, 12 November 2018, 1:54 AM
 


Thanks Brant! 


We have done the 90 sec video- with the clean version included ambient sound as per given feedback from DJ.

 Two things we have done according to feedback :

·         Longer clips as per duration on text

·         Ambient sound

 

The video has been shared in drive.

Thanks & looking forward for valuable feedback and further guidelines.

Samreen


https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1lQzIn2JEM8NFuELr0aSXSoPRbBvi_CRE?usp=sharing


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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Brant Knützen - Monday, 12 November 2018, 2:23 PM
 

Hi Samreen,

Thanks for uploading the short clean video, we will review and give feedback soon!

Brant

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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Brant Knützen - Monday, 12 November 2018, 2:57 PM
 

Hi Samreen,

Audio on clean version sounds fine.


For the edit, we need three files in the Google Drive folder:

1) The "clean" video file with just ambient sound 
2) The final short video file with text slides, ambient sound, and narration.
3) The script used in the final version (MS Word doc)

Please upload all three files to the Drive folder, then it’s easy to quickly edit them with the same style.

Thanks!

Brant


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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Monday, 12 November 2018, 10:57 PM
 

 Thanks Brant! 

we will do that. The final version of script - 90 sec video attached here. we are working on Number-2 ( The final short video file with text slides, ambient sound, and narration.), hopefully, will get back by 13 nov. 

the drive link doesn't open, instead it opens up in this forum, so i am sharing word file of script here. 

Samreen 

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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Wednesday, 14 November 2018, 7:27 PM
 


we have uploaded all  three files in the Google Drive folder:

1) The "clean" video file with just ambient sound 
2) The final short video file with text slides, ambient sound, and narration.
3) The script used in the final version (MS Word doc)


https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1lHlhWUcK79BNjliv-wjT1d2NlsVBiRai


Thanks & Looking forward

Samreen 

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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Brant Knützen - Wednesday, 14 November 2018, 8:16 PM
 

Hi Samreen,

Thanks for uploading the three files!

Somehow they ended up in the YFEED area, but I've moved them over to the SPO Pakistan area.

One note on the subtitle: 

"My name is Asif.  I sale cloths in..."

should be:

"My name is Asif.  I sell cloths in..."     This would be for selling raw cloth, which is what it looks like in the video.

If Asif sells pre-made clothing, then it would be "I sell clothes in..."

This is just feedback for the final edit of the short video with subtitles, and for the final version of the script.

For now, the upload of the three files is sufficient for the KAS edit of the compilation video, thanks!

Brant

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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Thursday, 15 November 2018, 1:16 AM
 
Thank you so much Brant for identifying! this is my mistake, innitaillay , it was "sell"but somehow computer gramatic checking replased and escape from my eye. 

yes, i faced tec difficuilties while uploading the file on SPO's drive,  but somehow mange to drope. Thanks ones again for guiding during the proccess.

Looking forward for feed back and eagerly waiting for finalization of 5 mint video script, so that we can start produaction.


Cheers

Samreen  

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Re: Shelter Participatory Organization - short "clean" version
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Thursday, 15 November 2018, 1:17 AM
 
Thank you so much Brant for identifying! this is my mistake, innitaillay , it was "sell"but somehow computer gramatic checking replased and escape from my eye. 

yes, i faced tec difficuilties while uploading the file on SPO's drive,  but somehow mange to drope. Thanks ones again for guiding during the proccess.

Looking forward for feed back and eagerly waiting for finalization of 5 mint video script, so that we can start produaction.


Cheers

Samreen  

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feedback from KAS meeting
by Brant Knützen - Thursday, 22 November 2018, 6:53 PM
 

Feedback from the KAS meeting:

  • Locate context on country map: Hyderabad, Pakistan
  • Highlight relevant SDG symbol in opening scenes
  • check spelling / grammar
  • Sustainable slum? Think about improving title, perhaps "Youth as agents of change"
  • Explain what changes can occur if the area becomes registered
  • Explain the significance of Asif creating this change
  • Clear up how we get from the current problem to solution
See my version of your 5-minute script (attached, and also on the long video forum) for ideas on how to better explain some of these points.

I also attach a couple of pictures to symbolize the stakeholders coming together on this project, which you may find as useful examples of a suitable graphic.

Brant



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Re: feedback from KAS meeting
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Friday, 23 November 2018, 6:10 PM
 


Thank you so much Brant and KAS team! This is amazing! Great learning, now,  we definitely having clear direction moving ahead for 5 mint video production. Thank ones again for this wise and valuable feedback.

Will get back , if needed any further clarification.

Cheers

Samreen & Team


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Re: feedback from KAS meeting
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Monday, 24 December 2018, 10:39 AM
 

 Dear Brant!

Greetings from Pakistan! 


As per feedback, we have made changes in the video, uploded all three files clean, with subt & music and word file of updated script have been uploaded in drive. 

Thanks & looking forward

Samreen 

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Re: feedback from KAS meeting
by Brant Knützen - Monday, 24 December 2018, 11:35 AM
 

Hi Samreen,

I'm glad to hear your team has completed production of the short video based on the feedback from KAS!

Where did you upload the files?

They should be in the shared Google drive here in the SPO area for short video files:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1lQzIn2JEM8NFuELr0aSXSoPRbBvi_CRE?usp=sharing

Can you double-check that the files have been uploaded there?

Thanks,

Brant

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Re: feedback from KAS meeting
by Samreen Khan Ghauri - Monday, 24 December 2018, 9:24 PM
 

 Hello Brant!

i had uploded file in Team project drive, now again uploaded on the drive link as you given, pleace check. 


Thaks & Looking forward! 

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